diff --git a/docs/en/upload.md b/docs/en/upload.md index 1eb5867e..441bf3d8 100644 --- a/docs/en/upload.md +++ b/docs/en/upload.md @@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ wifi_connect_event = function(T) end wifi_got_ip_event = function(T) - -- Note: Having an ip address does not mean there is internet access! + -- Note: Having an IP address does not mean there is internet access! -- Internet connectivity can be determined with net.dns.resolve(). print("Wifi connection is ready! IP address is: "..T.IP) print("Startup will resume momentarily, you have 3 seconds to abort.") @@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ wifi_disconnect_event = function(T) --the station has disassociated from a previously connected AP return end - -- total_tries: how many times the station will attempt to connect to the AP. + -- total_tries: how many times the station will attempt to connect to the AP. Should consider AP reboot duration. local total_tries = 75 print("\nWiFi connection to AP("..T.SSID..") has failed!") @@ -85,7 +85,7 @@ wifi_disconnect_event = function(T) --the list and returns the string corresponding to the disconnect reason. for key,val in pairs(wifi.eventmon.reason) do if val == T.reason then - print("Disconnect reason:"..val.."("..key..")") + print("Disconnect reason: "..val.."("..key..")") break end end